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Stormtrooper WIP... Help pls by Daennika Stormtrooper WIP... Help pls by Daennika
I'm trying to make an awesome looking Stormie with custom equipment and I still have trouble figuring out the helmet. What's wrong with it? :|
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Pheonix023 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
Looks like its comina long good so far...

Doesn't look like there is anything wrong with the helmet...just looks a little small. haven't watcvhed ANH in a while though, so I might be wrong about that
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Rex-Fox-Cody Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
I hope you finish this piece and FYI the helmet is awesome. Maybe bigger eyes, but there's nothing really wrong with it.

Again, hope you finish this. :D
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Elziler Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010
hmmm its almost like the helmet is to tall an not squat enough. thats about all i can see^^; but its realy good so far, i cant wait to see he finished product!
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Gratulor Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
I think it's a bit too long, and the trooper looks a bit hunched. Perhaps move the helmet up a little?

Looks good to me, but if I'd change anything that would be it.
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TracynOrdo Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
I know it's not the helmet but to me his/her right arm looks a little too chunky and the forearm needs to be lengthened a little
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mandomasta Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
it looks to me as if the neck is a little short. the rebreather tubes are to close to the shoulder strapes[link]
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xXWeaponPrimeXx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
It looks fine to me. But it could be a little flat in the front?
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SCAisover9000 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010   Traditional Artist
I don't know...i hate those things that are really obvious, but you don't know what it is....and things that are in plain sight but you cant see 'em... :banned:
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ShavaniDray Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010   Writer
More neck needs to show (I'm agreeing with others)? I have no idea, not a good drawer, so I'm not one hundred percent sure. But otherwise, I love it!
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All-is-Dust Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
you could also lower the 'mouth' abit
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All-is-Dust Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
well, for one the neck is a bit to short, so that counts as one thing you need to change, the next this that you need to change is the eyes, they're a bit to small, aside from that, everything else looks good ^^
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Lex-The-Bear Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
The eyes need to be bigger. If you want, I have a stormie helmet, I can take a pic of it from that perspective, give you a hand with it.
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sigpro54 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
the helmet looks a bit small compared to the rest of the trooper, also the perspective looks a little odd, but I still think it looks pretty dang good.
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EDXROX Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
I think it looks cool, but the helmet needs more pizzazz, like put a antennae on him or something.
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commander-13 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
it's better looking than most stormie helmets out there. I think a slight resize (bigger) could help.

-extend the respirator part a bit forward (ie extend the vent tube on the side, forward) => the "mouth" can then move slightly lower and it should fix the overall appearance of the helmet.
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SethSoraFett555 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nooo that looks like a stormie to me, I felt anger hatred and the unendingly lust to kill it when I saw it so yep it's a Stormie XD
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Content-Josho Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
These people are correct; most of the problem lies in the mouth section. In addition to what's already been said, let me add:

- The mouth (the bit with "teeth") is too angular, especially given the head appears to be looking downwards (as indicated by the brow).

- The bulbs bits (where the comlinks are) should droop down. You shouldn't be able to see much, if any, of the neckseal from the front.

- The eyes, as well, are too angular. The edges should be slightly curved, and the corners not so sharp.


Well, hope that helps. It's looking good, regardless.
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Sturman Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Student Filmographer
Custom Paint job. Comlink and exposed targeting interface over the right eye (with perhaps some Aurabesh, numbers and a scope).

Maybe a custom mouthpiece to allow for underwater breathing.
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Generalfoley Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Student Writer
Hmm... His helmet looks too clean. The rest of the armor, especially the kama, indicates that he's a vet and that his armor is battle-proven, so shouldn't he have a few scratches on his helmet? Just can't have a new helmet on trusty armor. And... that's all I can see... Keep up the good work, by the way.

The General
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CodyMacArthurFett Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
It's too cylindrical, it makes it look too much like the Phase II Clone Trooper armor. Extend the mask out slightly, and you should be fine. :)
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blood-dodo Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Look at the left circle (mouth area), compare it with the left eye and you'll find your culprit :D
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hellfire418 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
the perspective is off around what would be the mouth area, it looks like your trying to show it forward instead of to the side/profile on the right side of the image
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Daennika Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
Thanks! Duly noted, I appreciate the help.
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hellfire418 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem aside from that little piece the entire thing looks great
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darkstarr87 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i'm not sure if its the helmet.. maybe his neck is a little short?
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Daennika Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
That could be one thing... I haven't really given thought to the neck part!
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0glenbenton0 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
Well, first I would say it looks like shit, but yeah I don't know why?? Maybe get rid of the helmet and put a big penis instead.
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Daennika Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
I'll remove YOUR head and put your penis in there :)
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0glenbenton0 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
I hope its your penis. It would be so horny having ultra deep throat gore decapitation sex.
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ArcSpartan009 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, what's wrong with you? If you don't have any useful to say to help Daennika out, keep your worthless mouth shut you chakaar-aruetii.

I'd suggest making the his helmet a bit bigger, then add a little more neck for maneuverability, Stormy armor is usually more flexible.

Just a thought.
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spartan301 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
dude i think he's joking ^^;
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ArcSpartan009 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, a little over the top huh? I just can't stand it when people dog on each others work.
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spartan301 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
no problem you just have to look at the reply if the artist is angry then go a head and yell at them
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