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Stormtrooper WIP... Help plsby ~Daennika

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I'm trying to make an awesome looking Stormie with custom equipment and I still have trouble figuring out the helmet. What's wrong with it? :|
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~Pheonix023 Sep 14, 2010
Looks like its comina long good so far...

Doesn't look like there is anything wrong with the helmet...just looks a little small. haven't watcvhed ANH in a while though, so I might be wrong about that
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~Rex-Fox-Cody Aug 2, 2010
I hope you finish this piece and FYI the helmet is awesome. Maybe bigger eyes, but there's nothing really wrong with it.

Again, hope you finish this. :D
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~Elziler Aug 1, 2010
hmmm its almost like the helmet is to tall an not squat enough. thats about all i can see^^; but its realy good so far, i cant wait to see he finished product!
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~Gratulor Jul 29, 2010
I think it's a bit too long, and the trooper looks a bit hunched. Perhaps move the helmet up a little?

Looks good to me, but if I'd change anything that would be it.
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~TracynOrdo Jul 29, 2010
I know it's not the helmet but to me his/her right arm looks a little too chunky and the forearm needs to be lengthened a little
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Mood: Daily Needs ~mandomasta Jul 29, 2010
it looks to me as if the neck is a little short. the rebreather tubes are to close to the shoulder strapes[link]
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~xXWeaponPrimeXx Jul 29, 2010
It looks fine to me. But it could be a little flat in the front?
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~SCAisover9000 Jul 29, 2010   Traditional Artist
I don't know...i hate those things that are really obvious, but you don't know what it is....and things that are in plain sight but you cant see 'em... :banned:
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Mood: Love !ShavaniDray Jul 29, 2010   Writer
More neck needs to show (I'm agreeing with others)? I have no idea, not a good drawer, so I'm not one hundred percent sure. But otherwise, I love it!
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*FromtheVaultLiterate Jul 29, 2010
you could also lower the 'mouth' abit
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